A change in the story

After feedback in class and giving it a thought, I decided to change my storylines a little to take the element of surprise which was limiting me and introducing the piñata in the first vignette.
The first scene will be a party (everything in 2D) with sounds of children and laughs in the background, which will be the setting for entering the piñata. That way, I will explore the feelings and ridiculous of the situation. The rest of the first two vignettes will be the same.
In the last vignette though, my character will struggle to keep herself together. Literally. She will start falling into pieces (again, literally) and she will end up all scrambled inside. Burst of light will come from the hitting and the ending will remain as the piñata breaking, for which I will again relay on sound.

To make myself more clear, I started some concept art to define the feeling and look, as well as the colors. I still think it's best to keep the character a little cartoonish, and I don't mind if it becomes a little comical, because it would still be some kind of dark humor.